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LongHunter
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PostSubject: 11:00 Check Out Time is another eleven hours away   11:00 Check Out Time is another eleven hours away Icon_minitimeFri Apr 01, 2011 7:48 pm


Although ever aware of your presence
I have to laugh this particular time
As of anymore any new approach
Is comically refreshing I suppose
A clear signal for one to open
A clear cue for one to perform
Entertainment derived from expectation
Entertainment at the expense of the performer
Turning away as not to charge at swirling red capes
Sword blade well hidden behind bright waving cloth
Entertainment presented from the unexpected
Audience crowded upon a well lit stage
Even in a crowd, I can pick you out
Can you envision both mirth and erotica
Rolling around and lustfully tinged ?
Eastern Standard Time spent blissfully
Inside a Best Western Motel room
Sashaying for me upon a worn green carpet
Even more blurred looking through a clear plastic cup
Microwave, mini fridge, small talk and big expectations
Good liquor, fair company and bad accommodations
Improving with each jiggle and deep quaff
Inhibitions cascading into warm passionate pools
Weekend late night pickups and drunken fools
Night flower petals, jeweled as if by fallen dew
Tickled as if by a Honeybee’s buzzing dance
Sweet scented blossom opening, allowing
Reflecting most all in a tall mirror
Hung crooked above a low motel dresser
Lean this way a little more
Cable television droning diversion
Ice melts in a small square plastic bucket
Oh no baby, don’t take those shoes off
Eleven o’clock check out time
Is another eleven hours away
Pour me another mescal and lean a little this way
Do call me caddish if you so like
While I ascend your up skirt hike
Flower of this night, sweet cloying scent
Looking through a half filled clear plastic cup
At seemingly beautiful obsequious eyes
No telling what goes on behind them
Too besotted to even care for now
Best Western Motel, Eastern Standard Time
Within the soft glow of a bedside lamp
A besotted fool and a liquored up vamp
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Gabriel
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PostSubject: Re: 11:00 Check Out Time is another eleven hours away   11:00 Check Out Time is another eleven hours away Icon_minitimeMon Apr 11, 2011 10:53 am

nice entry, sounds like a possible night I had once...LOL
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LongHunter
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PostSubject: Re: 11:00 Check Out Time is another eleven hours away   11:00 Check Out Time is another eleven hours away Icon_minitimeMon May 09, 2011 6:09 pm

Gabriel wrote:
nice entry, sounds like a possible night I had once...LOL

Something about a nice motel room.


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